Interlinear

Score: 176.21 (pass)

s/ +(?=$|:)//mg -> s/ +(\n|:)/$1/g

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$"x
y...c|(@z=/[aeiouy]/ig).'/'.s/\w/$&/g}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g,$_;s/(.{57})...+\S/$1.../,$_=@w.":	$_
$d[-1]:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
"if$_="@w";s/ +(
|:)/$1/g

Score: 177.21 (pass)

.{3,} -> ...+

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$"x
y...c|(@z=/[aeiouy]/ig).'/'.s/\w/$&/g}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g,$_;s/(.{57})...+\S/$1.../,$_=@w.":	$_
$d[-1]:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
"if$_="@w";s/ +(?=$|:)//mg

Score: 178.20 (pass)

Move a s/// outside the if, saving a space.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$"x
y...c|(@z=/[aeiouy]/ig).'/'.s/\w/$&/g}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g,$_;s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@w.":	$_
$d[-1]:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
"if$_="@w";s/ +(?=$|:)//mg

Score: 179.20 (pass)

Replace a @_=// with s//$&/

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$"x
y...c|(@z=/[aeiouy]/ig).'/'.s/\w/$&/g}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g,$_;s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@w.":	$_
$d[-1]:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +(?=$|:)//mg if$_="@w"

Score: 180.20 (pass)

Woohoo, 7 strokes off with some reorganization.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$"x
y...c|(@z=/[aeiouy]/ig).'/'.(@x=/\w/g)}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g,$_;s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@w.":	$_
$d[-1]:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +(?=$|:)//mg if$_="@w"

Score: 187.18 (pass)

Get rid of a space.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$v+=@z=/[aeiouy]/ig;$t+=@x=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@z.'/'.@x}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g;s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$t:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +$//mg,$v=$t=0if$_="@w"

Score: 188.18 (pass)

Twiddle with the tiebreakers, and -> if

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$v+=@z=/[aeiouy]/ig;$t+=@x=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@z.'/'.@x}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g;s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$t:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +$//mg if$_="@w";$v=$t=t

Score: 189.32 (pass)

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=/\S*\w\S*/g;$_="@w"and
s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +$//mg;$v=$a=a

Score: 190.33 (pass)

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]//g]
",s/ +$//mg;$v=$a=a

Score: 192.33 (pass)

Remove the outer map, thanks to aliasing. I thought map didn't do that?

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$_|=$"x3&"$_  ";$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]/$&/g]
",s/ +$//mg;$v=$a=a

Score: 194.33 (pass)

YES!, finally got rid of the stupid extra s/ +$//.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map$_|$"x3&"$_  ",/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/(.{57}).{3,}\S/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]/$&/g]
",s/ +$//mg;$v=$a=a

Score: 198.34 (pass)

Oops, left a ' ' in. $" saves one more stroke.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map$_|$"x3&"$_  ",/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/ +$//,s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]/$&/g]
",s/ +$//;$v=$a=a

Score: 199.35 (pass)

Replace sprintf with more bit-twiddling.

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map$_|'   '&"$_  ",/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/ +$//,s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]/$&/g]
",s/ +$//;$v=$a=a

Score: 201.32 (pass)

Better way to count matches (s/ +[^.]/$&/g), remove one more newline (all of the remaining ones have some sort of use).

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map{sprintf'%-3s',$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig;$_="@w"and
s/ +$//,s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..s/ +[^.]/$&/g]
",s/ +$//;$v=$a=a

Score: 203.33 (pass)

-p rocks

#!perl -p056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map{sprintf'%-3s',$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig;
(s/ +$//,s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..(@_=/ +[^.]/g)]
",s/ +$//)if$_="@w";$v=$a=a

Score: 209.31 (fail)

[^.] -> \w, removed a newline.

#!perl -n056
if(@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map{sprintf'%-3s',$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig){
$_="@w";s/ +$//;s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../;$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..(@_=/\s+\w/g)]
";s/ +$//;print}$v=$a=a

Score: 209.32 (pass)

Now passes the 1.04 tests. Also reorganized the conditional, and changed a \s into a space.

#!perl -n056
@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x
y...c|@y.'/'.@o}@w=map{sprintf'%-3s',$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig;
(s/ +$//,s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../,$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..(@_=/ +[^.]/g)]
",s/ +$//,print)if$_="@w";$v=$a=a

Score: 212.31 (pass)

Better accumulator ($v, $a) initialization, hard tabs.

#!perl -n056
if(@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x y...c|@y.'/'.@o}
@w=map{sprintf"%-3s",$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig){$_="@w";s/ +$//;s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../;
$_=@d.":	$_
$v/$a:	@d[0..(@_=/\s+[^.]/g)]
";s/ +$//;print}$v=$a=a

Score: 217.31 (pass)

FORE! Should be a decent enough first attempt. Tie-breakers completely unoptimized. Could save a few strokes with literal tabs, but I'll save that for later.

#!perl -n056
($v,$a)=a;if(@d=map{$v+=@y=/[aeiouy]/ig;$a+=@o=/\w/g;$"x y...c|@y."/".@o}
@w=map{sprintf"%-3s",$_}/\S*\w\S*/ig){$_="@w";s/ +$//;s/(.{57}).{4,}/$1.../;
$_=@d.":\t$_
$v/$a:\t@d[0..(@_=/\s+[^.]/g)]
";s/ +$//;print}